Autumn Poems

Can you think of any similes, metaphors and personification to describe autumn? Use all your senses to describe what you see, hear, touch, smell and taste.

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  1. 1

    kamal said,

    the leaves crunced like crisps in a packet

  2. 2

    mya said,

    That sound interesting, here’s a simile that I’ve wrote about Autumn:
    As the crispy, crumpled leaves fell onto the heap of twigs my chilly feet crunched in the nature.

  3. 4

    Hello Mya- Lovely to hear from you. How are you getting on at your new school? Be careful- check your comment. Have you used a simile? Remember a simile compares two things to show how they are alike e.g. my feet were as chilly as ice or I was as brave like a bear.

  4. 9

    Aaliya said,

    I have got some personification
    the wind danced wildy through the trees (P

    • 10

      Zoe xxx said,

      It was:

      It was so peaceful that I heard the birds sing like a quior of angels.

      It was so still that I sensed a bare tree on the other side of the field
      shivering like people who forgot there coats.

      It was so hushed that I reconsed the sun smile it glorious smile.

      It was so quiet that I heard the leaves crunch like a crisp bag.

      It was so foggy that I felt the winds breeze touch my face.

    • 11

      Zoe xxx said,

      Thats really good Aaliya go on how do think mine is and what else can I uplevel or add in 😛

  5. 12

    zishan said,

    the leave look like they are brown and crunchy like cornflakes falling of the tree and it’s early autumn because some tree’s are still green

    • 13

      Zoe xxx said,

      Check that again zishan good smilie but it kind of dosen’t make sense! 😮

    • 14

      Zoe xxx said,

      Why don’t you do it like this as I watched the brown, crunchy leaves falling with a sound of corn flakes braking while they fell down like snow I reconside some of them had a glorious smile that warmed me up like burning heaters or a boiling water hot bottel 😉 🙂 :p 😮 😀 😕 😦

      • 15

        Zoe xxx said,

        Sorry that dosen’t make sense ethier
        Why don’t you do it like this :
        As i watched the crunchy brown leaves fall down I heard there cry as they cracked like eggs making a sound of cornflakes braking.
        Reconising that some of them had a glum face which made me feel downhearted. :(. There do you like it ? 😀

  6. 16

    karolina said,

    HI mya how you doing are you ok hows your new school. 😀 😛

  7. 19

    karolina said,

    These sentences are fab ! love them

  8. 20

    zoe N (5DM) said,

    I agree karoloina these are fab If they where cakes it would ate them all 😛 (sorry ingore me i’m just being greedy 😦 LOL 😀 )
    heres a smilie as sweet as a cake

  9. 21

    Zara said,

    Here is a autumn similie:

    The bark of the tree was wrinkly as my gran,
    The leaves were as red as blood,
    The trees danced through the trees,
    The wind howled like a angry wolf,

  10. 22

    mya said,

    Very interesting Zara, this is my similie sentance:
    The leaves on the tree’s waved like they were greeting me.


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